Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Main nay dekha bulandiyoon kow pastiyoon main.
Main nay dekha pastiyoon kow bulandiyoon per.
Daryawoon kay pani kow pahadoon per chadtay dekha.
Zamin kow falak kay ooper dekha.
Koi tow Yousuf hoga kissie qaid khanay main.
Shayad mairey khwab kee tabir hogi.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    Its a nice poetry and I know how much u interested in urdu poetry like attending Mushairas and reading poetry. We miss u so much here. U can write me back at Zainsyed60626@yahoo.com. I really need to ask some questions

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  2. roohi nazkiFebruary 18, 2010 at 10:23 AM

    Every Nazki is a poet, it seems!!! I am not competent to comment on the technique, but I get the thought... and that is nice. Why not take the plunge, like Iqbal Chacha, and publish your own book of poems....

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  3. UnknownFebruary 18, 2010 at 11:46 AM

    Roohi,thank you.I dont call it poetry.It is expression of my stray thoughts in a form which is perhaps my own.
    Zaid please go on with your questions.

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  4. UnknownMarch 3, 2010 at 11:26 AM

    Dear Bilal Uncle,
    Roohi di is right... the lines are beautiful... and isn't great poetry mostly stray and random....
    Gaalib writes: Aate hain gaib se ye mazameen khayaal mein; Gaalib sareer-e-khama nawa-e-sarosh hai...

    Please keep sharing

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